In class the other day, Arianna and I switched papers to peer edit. I think it went really well. Arianna gave me some helpful tips that I will take into consideration as I finish the rest of my essay. Right now, I have about five pages of my final paper done; however I have more information to include. This morning, I went to the writing center and got to have someone edit my introduction and first couple of paragraphs. I need to work on transitioning from one paragraph to another. I will finish my essay this weekend!
Yesterday, I presented my material to the class in a Keynote presentation. I think it went pretty well. I was very nervous and said "um" too many times which is my pet peeve. Other than that I think I did a good job. There was a little problem with the video clips from You Tube. Since we can not get You Tube on our laptops, I needed to capture the video from my home computer to my laptop. The picture was not very good but the sound was perfect, and therefore, the class got the idea of what I was trying to show. Amelia's presentation was also very good and I really enjoyed her introduction with the drawing of pictures and the answering of questions. School is coming to an end!! =(
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